Saturday, May 16, 2009

" A Mysteries Shadow"

In a small place in Murren Switzerland, lives a handsome guy by the named Edgar. He is 18 years old and lives along in an apartment. He has the most gorgeous light brown eyes along with his beautiful light brown face. He is a very mysteries man, but yet the whole town knows him. He likes to keep his own business to him self and private. His parents die when he was 5 years old, so he had it to stay along in the world with no one by his side. He grow up to become handsome and respectful young men.


Every one in town knows him. Because he is always helping others and he is a very kind, thouful hard working men. Even thought the whole town seems to know him, he claims that no one does. Everything he does is very strange and weird, but yet he was respected by everyone.
An old white hair women by the named Elizabeth, claims to know his parents. She is a 64 years old woman that lives in a creepy house with lots of barking dogs and is very scary. Unfurtually Edgar lived right next to her.


As every usual early morning Edgar got up to go to work. The old white hair woman is just steering at the house with no concerns of what Edgar thinks. Eventually Edgar goes to work and leaves the house early. When he was leaving he smiled at her and yelled across the porch “see you later Ms.Elizabeth." She was shock by the spoken words of Edgar.


Elizabeth: I can’t believe it, that got to be him, she mumbles with fear and confusion. Edgar would work sense morning to night fall in a small factory just 2 miles away. He had no friends or family members near by to be with. He was lonely but yet he always seen to be waiting for someone.

When night fall came, he went home like always. And as always Elizabeth still was steering at him with such a dirty look that seem she wanted to kill him or slide him into pieces. Edgar enters to the house and lays down in the bed and smiles" I know you are here, what’s your purpose for this unpleasant visit?" with a unpleasant tone

"Am here to deliver a message" a strange known voice came from the left side of the bed.

Edgar: tell me, what’s your name?

Does it matters? With an angry voice. Don’t play around with me; you know who I am an angry horrified voice spoke again.

Edgar: ok so tell me.

My named is S.O.D

Edgar: uh so what does it stands for?

S.O.D: You are very smart men, you should have figure out already, don’t you think.

Edgar: Perhaps but I won’t waste my time figuring out some stupid named that I won’t even remember in few days.

Edgar: so tell me what’s your message?


S.O.D: It’s getting closer and you must dispose of it, its time.


Edgar: she is not ready yet, she has time.


S.O.D: no you must do it now, with an angry yelled voice, he exclaimed.
Edgar: I know what am doing.


S.O.D: It seems to me you don’t.


Edgar: just leave and know that she dies tomorrow at night fall.


S.O.D: well then you know what to do and by when, a disappearing voice spoke.

Edgar finds him self again along in the empty house without no one by sides him. He had no words or knowledge to describe what happened just moments ago.

He falls sleep just wishing this was a dream that soon he will wake up from. Next morning comes and Edgar knows what’s going too happened but he doesn’t wants to admit it.

As usual he gets up and gets ready to go to work. This time was different he left the house with such thoughts in his mind. He even forgot to say bye to the old white hair women next door. Edgar mumbles between his lips “your time is near when the night falls I will come for your soul".


He left and worked until the night fall. He wants himself today in the job, he was very silence and didn’t talk much not that he never does. Finally the night fall down and his walking home with such scary face that you can say he killed someone or his about to.
Just before 5 minutes to his house he takes out a black gun. This time instead of walking to his house, he walked to the white hair woman’s house with a scary face.

Suddenly the door opens with such wind a forced. The old woman hears from her bedroom then the open door. She is terrified wishing to go away.
Edgar doesn’t stops until he reaches the room of the old woman. The door is push with an immensely force that breaks in pieces.

Elizabeth: who are you? What do you want? What are you doing here? She yelled with a scare and freighting voice.


Edgar: so many questions and so many answers in a deep fritting voice he reply, but only one answer.


Suddenly the old white hair woman feels an extremely unstop pain in her heart.


Elizabeth: am so sorry I never meant to but I was force to. She spoke


Edgar: yelling what do you mean who force you?


Elizabeth: am sorry


Those were the last words of the poor lonely old women
Edgar was so confused and terrified by her last words.
Suddenly a cold windy wind came and the body of Edgar vanishes like water from your hands.

The man who everyone in town knows has vanished but yet continues to be a mystery. As such as the person who killed his parents.

The end...

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